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Nice love story
Dear Friends,
This is a wonderful story………… It may take more time to read but take time and read it whenever u r free………..
she was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. I cannot describe her beauty in the limited time I have here. I was 23 and fresh out of
college, when I saw her. I don't know if it was the hormones but I loved her at first sight. She was the girl of my dreams.
It is said that matches our made in heaven. It was sheer destiny that we were traveling to Chennai on the same train, The Niligiri Express. We
were in the same compartment, S1 and were seated next to each other, 25 and 26. It was an amazing coincidence as my ticket had been confirmed
only at the last minute.
"Hi, my name is Shalini," she introduced herself with a beaming smile. She stretched out her right hand. I was shivering when I shook it.
"I am Sunderesan," I said and added, "Pleased to meet you." She had a serene, innocent face; the face of the kind
of person who gets bullied in school. The image of a woman who couldn't hurt a fly if she wanted to.
"How old are you?" I blurted out. It was the worst question to ask a woman but I was a nervous wreck and I wanted to talk
to this woman. She smiled at me and said, "Never ask a man his salary and a woman her age."
"I'm so sorry. I don't..." My tongue adamantly stuck to the roof of my mouth
"No, it is okay. Let us say, I will be sixty seven in 2050." I worked out the math. She was twenty two. I was
twenty three. It was perfect! A match made in heaven.
"Do you have a crush on me?" she asked. "What? How could you ask...?"
"Do you have a crush on me or not?" she asked emphasizing on 'crush'.
"To tell you the truth, yes," I said meekly. "It's okay. You can be bold about it. I'll tell you a
little secret." She pulled my ear next to her mouth and whispered, "I think you are attractive. I might even love you"
I turned pink the next moment. "Hey you believed me, didn't you? April fool, go to school. Tell your teacher, you are a fool," she shouted. She laughed at
the top of her voice. I checked my watch. It was April 1st, 2005 and I had been made a jackass. I didn't want to look at the woman's face
again. I loved her but I hated her for what she had done. I turned to the opposite side and stared out of the window.
She noticed my sulking face. “Hey, don't get mad at me. It was a joke. That's all. I'm sorry," she said. I didn't look at her and didn't reply.
"Okay. What can I do to compensate?"
"You could sing a song for me," I said softly. I wanted to know how well my girl could sing. "Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you." She
stood up and went to the centre of the compartment. "Friends, we have a birthday boy in our midst. I want
all of you to wish him happy birthday."
The entire compartment including the TTE (Train Ticket Examiner) was singing "Happy birthday to Sunderesan."
She took out a vegetable sandwich from her bag. She said that it was a substitute for a cake. I cut the sandwich and gave her
the first piece. She removed the tomato and cucumber from the sandwich. She pasted the cucumber and tomato all over my face. I distributed
the remaining bits of the sandwich to everyone in the compartment. It was the best birthday I had ever had.
When all the euphoria died I asked her, "How did you know that it was my birthday?"
She pointed to the card on top of my bag. “Will you make a birthday resolution for me?" she asked.
"Sure. Tell me." "Promise to always smile because life presents too many opportunities to
cry. And you look ugly when you are sad." "It is a promise." I rested my palm on top of hers.
The perfectly romantic scene was disturbed by a child's cry coming from the adjoining apartment. She took her hand off mine. I
thought, "Damn, tough luck."
She went to the next compartment to see what the problem was. The boy was two years old and his mother was not to be found.
Nobody seemed to care about the boy.
She carried the boy in her arms and brought him to our compartment. She cajole the boy by singing a lullaby for him. She had a
sweet voice; the voice of a nightingale.
"I love kids," she said. "I love kids, too," I replied, eager to show we had similar tastes. The boy did not stop crying. He appeared to be
terrified of us. His mother was nowhere to be seen.
"You don't like songs. Okay, I will tell you a story. Once upon a time, in a faraway land, there lived a king."
The boy listened intently for a second but started crying as soon as she paused.
"Hey, relax. Give me time to think of a story. You are an impatient baby. In this land..." "I will look for the boy's mother," I said. She nodded
her head. I found the boy's mother, two compartments away. She had gone there to meet a friend. She had forgotten about her kid. When we came back to S1, we found the boy sound asleep in Shalini's lap. She had used all her powers of persuasion to make him feel secure in her lap.
"I want to thank..." "Shh...Your son is sleeping. Don't disturb him," she whispered to the boy's mother and gave the boy to her. "Do you want the Nobel peace prize?" I asked her cynically. "I love people. When I am around, the people around me should be happy. That is my philosophy in life," she said, sincerely. It made me feel small and stupid in front of her. I began to rethink about my mission in life. Should I be a priest? No,
can't marry her. Social worker, peace activist...maybe. We heard a voice in the distance shouting "Is there a doctor on this train?" "Dr. Shalini, here. How can I help you?" she shouted back. We waited to see the face of the voice we had heard.It was a co-passenger, a bearded man who seemed anxious.
"Doctor, my father is serious. Please do something."
"Come with me. You could be of help," she told me. She caught hold of my arm and guided me along the compartment. I had absolutely no say in the
matter. Oh! The power of women! The old man was in a grave condition. His breathing was heavy and he was coughing profusely. He seemed ready to make peace with god. "Open the windows," she told me. I opened all the windows to allow fresh air to come in. "Hold him up for me," she instructed.
I made the old man sit up. She took out her stethoscope and checked his heartbeat. She checked his pulse for variations. I watched her lovingly as she worked her magic on the old man. She was so soft and tender with people. Whether it was a little boy or an old man, she had so much affection for them. Unbelievably, the old man was normal within half an hour. His son didn't have enough words to thank Shalini.
"He is okay now. Don't disturb him. Let him sleep well," she instructed him. "I never expected you to be a doctor," I said. "Men always think that beautiful women don't have brains." I didn't know how to reply to that remark. Did she mean that she was beautiful, or brainy or both. One can never understand a woman's mind. So, I diverted the conversation. "What made you become a doctor?" I asked. "A lot of things. It was my father's dream. Above all else, it gives me the power to make people smile; the power to save lives." "Will you marry me?" I asked, spontaneously. I had never been more sure
of myself. "Is this April fool?" "No. I am serious. See, I know that I am unemployed. I am not even as educated as you. I don't even look good. I have no
caliber. But I love you. Will you marry me?" "You know nothing about me. I don't like commitments. I live every day like it is my last." "If you marry me, I will live everyday like it is my first." She closed her beautiful eyes. She took a deep breath and thought for a moment. The suspense was killing.
"God, why didn't I meet you earlier," she said. I had no time to reply. The doors to my mouth were sealed by her lips. I thought that my head was immersed in the clouds. The people in my compartment pretended to close their eyes. But I could see the men looking at me with envy through the corner of their
eyes. It was the most beautiful moment of my life. It still is the most beautiful. The train came to a screeching halt. We had reached
Tirupur station. It was hard to believe that so much had happened in two hours. There are some moments in life which you can remember
even in your sleep. For me, it was what happened at Tirupur railway station. It redefined my life forever.
"I am hungry. Get me something to eat," said Shalini. She dug into her leather handbag and brought out twenty rupees.
"It's okay. I have money. What do you want?" "Get me Strawberry milk to drink. And honey, I love you," she said, earnestly.
We hugged again. For the last time. The milk booth was about hundred feet from S1. It gave me time to think about the sudden changes in my life. My parents were conservative people. I had to convince them about Shalini. If they agreed, good. If not, who cares? I loved Shalini more than my parents.
My thoughts were disrupted by the sound of an explosion. It sounded like the aggregation of a thousand thunders. The impact of
the explosion threw me off my feet. I turned to look at the train. S1, S2 and S3 had been reduced to pieces, like waste in a manufacturing
process. My only thought was about Shalini. I ran towards where S1 had previously been. I searched for her amidst the corpses. All I
could find were severed hands, burnt flesh and a fresh stream of blood. Not a single body was identifiable in the three compartments.
Who on earth could do such a cruel thing, I wondered. I swore that I would get even with the people who had taken my
beloved Shalini's life. I wept like a little boy who had lost his favorite toy. Amidst the tears, I thought about the two hours I had spent with
Shalini. Something she had said had struck me as strange. "You know nothing about me. I live everyday like it is my last. God, I
wish I had met you earlier." "Could it be Shalini," I wondered. "No, not Shalini. She had too innocent a face to do such a
dastardly act. Besides, she was a doctor. And they know the value of a human life," I reasoned to myself. The next morning, my worst fears were confirmed. A newspaper report said, "A twenty two year old doctor named Shalini had committed suicide on the Niligiri express. She had taken the lives of
hundred people with her. The reasons for the attack are unknown."
I never understood the reasons for the attack. It could have been personal or ideological. All I can still remember is
her face, how innocent it looked. How she made everyone around her happy. How she showed love and care to kids and old men alike. That face was a mask. Beneath the benevolent mask, was the true Shalini. A hard-nosed, sadistic, terrorist capable of sacrificing human life to
satisfy her selfish needs. She truly changed my life. >From then on, I realized that every human wears a mask which he develops over a period of time.
It is the mask which is exposed to the world. Beneath that mask, after layers of deceit there lies the true nature of each individual. This
real person in each one of us is intricately more fascinating than any figment of wild imagination. Shalini's mask was my first love. I will always love
her.
This is a forwarded mail from my friend, I thought to share it with you friends . . .
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19-11-2007, 01:45 PM
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is NOT a PC/Mac
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Re: Nice love story
wonderful story  can make a good film also  did u contacted Shahrukh?
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19-11-2007, 02:14 PM
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Re: Nice love story
Yup, everyone wears a mask.....metaphorically
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19-11-2007, 06:08 PM
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Re: Nice love story
this story will fetch an oscar
jokin
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19-11-2007, 06:09 PM
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Wahahaha~!
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Re: Nice love story

dil se
until i read last para i thought it happened with u but then its all frowarded
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19-11-2007, 06:10 PM
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Re: Nice love story
meri to aakhon mein aason nikal aaye.
HEH.nice story ekdum bollywood ishtyle.
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19-11-2007, 06:44 PM
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Techtree Reviewer
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Re: Nice love story
The girl did save his life though. She could've killed him along with others, but she decided to send him outside and then detonate the bomb.
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19-11-2007, 06:58 PM
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Re: Nice love story
acchi story hai.
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19-11-2007, 07:29 PM
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Re: Nice love story
tirupur(near coimbattoor) bomb blast on train?when?  story is nice
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19-11-2007, 08:09 PM
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Re: Nice love story
Wat can i say..
One babe wasted!
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19-11-2007, 09:12 PM
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Re: Nice love story
^^ROFL. What an inference extracted from the story.
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19-11-2007, 10:10 PM
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Re: Nice love story
^^ He's right you know. No wonder i have no gf. All the good ones are busy blasting themselves up.
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19-11-2007, 10:44 PM
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Re: Nice love story
^^ hahaha ........ after reading this emotional story ... ur comments are a welcome change ........... over all nice story .. perfect for Shahrukh ..the CRIER ( no offence) .......
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19-11-2007, 11:23 PM
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Re: Nice love story
Its the story of film Dhokha.
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19-11-2007, 11:31 PM
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^^ He's right you know. No wonder i have no gf. All the good ones are busy blasting themselves up.
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Ha ha ha ha .................lolz...............very funny commnet
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Re: Nice love story
lololololol
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19-11-2007, 11:49 PM
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Wat can i say..
One babe wasted! 
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hahaha..... great thinking, me & my cousin both r laughing.
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Re: Nice love story
Lolz...abe this is just a story yaar...stop worrying so much...
although nice plot for a movie, not so typical bollywood type
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20-11-2007, 12:48 AM
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Re: Nice love story
I liked the comments written after the first post...good going guys
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20-11-2007, 08:11 AM
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dil se
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20-11-2007, 08:14 AM
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Re: Nice love story
Love is in the THREAD
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20-11-2007, 08:57 AM
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Re: Nice love story
One: Terrorists are not so light hearted. Since a person knows he is going to do something which will take the life of several 100 people around along with his.....he cant behave normal. At most he can be quiet to pacify(hide) his emotions.
Two: Since the apartments were charred and bodies beyond recognition......how was it inferenced that the lady who is a doctor having a name of "Shalini" committed suicide ? No clue !
Three: What an aweful mother........went 3 compartments away.......forgetting her baby ?? WTF......cant digest !
With all the above holes........this movie is gonna be doomed. Or, will it be a hit ?
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Wahahaha~!
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One: Terrorists are not so light hearted. Since a person knows he is going to do something which will take the life of several 100 people around along with his.....he cant behave normal. At most he can be quiet to pacify(hide) his emotions.
Two: Since the apartments were charred and bodies beyond recognition......how was it inferenced that the lady who is a doctor having a name of "Shalini" committed suicide ? No clue !
Three: What an aweful mother........went 3 compartments away.......forgetting her baby ?? WTF......cant digest !
With all the above holes........this movie is gonna be doomed. Or, will it be a hit ?
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20-11-2007, 09:10 AM
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Re: Nice love story
good story and really nice comments
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GONNA GET ALL OF YOU
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Re: Nice love story
A story of loverian people
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20-11-2007, 05:01 PM
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Re: Nice love story
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One: Terrorists are not so light hearted. Since a person knows he is going to do something which will take the life of several 100 people around along with his.....he cant behave normal. At most he can be quiet to pacify(hide) his emotions.
Two: Since the apartments were charred and bodies beyond recognition......how was it inferenced that the lady who is a doctor having a name of "Shalini" committed suicide ? No clue !
Three: What an aweful mother........went 3 compartments away.......forgetting her baby ?? WTF......cant digest !
With all the above holes........this movie is gonna be doomed. Or, will it be a hit ?
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Take it easy yaar...
If u r thinking this much, then surely u can't watch Bollywood movies.
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20-11-2007, 05:04 PM
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Think Zen.
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Re: Nice love story
^^Lolz.
Regards,
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Re: Nice love story
this was typo DIL SE ....i had read this story earlier on Infosys Bulletin Boards when I was wrkg there .....
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ZOMG..thats the funniest way I have ever heard a kiss being described!
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Re: Nice love story
WTF?
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